This just in . . . poetry leads to song!

Lyric poetry is . . . well . . . song!

So it shouldn't surprise anybody that poets write songs too.  Of course, songwriters can write poems as well.  And sometimes, when the two talents or gifts or impulses are closely aligned in an artist, you might get pretty good stuff in both categories: poems that swing and songs that have some depth.

My first poem, written at around 10 years old, was a song, a cowboy song, probably because I watched 'The Lone Ranger' and 'Rawhide' and 'Gunsmoke' and 'The Rifleman' every week as a kid.  Like everybody else did.

I mean, I really dug it when some old cowhand or drifter pulled out a guitar or a harmonica or a squeezebox around a campfire and sang a song -- sad, silly, serene.  Forget the guns and the fist fights.  I listened to the song.

So now let me introduce you to 50 Sent Songs, a project I worked on throughout 2022/23: fifty songs posted to Bandcamp every week for 50 weeks (at 50¢ apiece, or more if you've a mind to pay more -- that's how Bandcamp works).  And yes, they're all still out there on my Bandcamp page and still just 50¢ apiece.

Go there & you'll find poems by Shakespeare and Thomas Gray, Emily Dickinson and Leigh Hunt, Richard Lovelace and Caedmon, and of course Yours Truly set to music, and plenty of songs where, if I must say so myself, the lyric is as much the thing as the melody.  Each for a mere 50¢!

So again, head to YTLB (me) at Bandcamp and check it out.  Please.  Check it out.

Hi-ho Silver, away!

The Shepherd's Calendar - a chronicle of the plague year in New York City

The artist Barbara Nathanson and I began working together in Los Angeles in the mid-1990's.  We met in a small artist-curated/operated gallery in downtown L.A., before that part of town became overrun by development and encampments.  

Nothing came of that project, except for a now-35 year working relationship.  For more than 10 years, we "conversed" across disciplines, a poem or line of a poem sparking an image which in turn provoked another poem or line of a poem which again occasioned a painting or a passage in a larger composition.  Eventually, we created a body of work -- dozens of paintings and about 150 poems -- out of which came exhibitions around the world, and work published in journals in the U.S., Europe and Asia.

In 2019, I proposed a new project, a more focused effort that resulted in The Shepherd's Calendar.  The poems and songs of this book are based more or less loosely on the first Shepherd's Calendar, by Edmund Spenser, featuring some of the old characters, like Colin Clout, Hobbinol, Rosalind, Thenod and Cuddie, all doing somewhat the same things as their original counterparts: shepherding (dog-walking, in this case), carousing, singing, competing for honors and prizes, and falling helplessly in love as the year waxes, wanes and dies, January through December.

Only in my Shepherd's Calander's case, that waxing, waning and dying occurs on the streets of Manhattan, Brooklyn, Far Rockaway, Queens, during the very depths of the 2020 coronavirus pandemic.

Barbara, as before, read the drafts and manuscripts of the poems and "replied" visually, with some sometimes stunning, always intriguing visual metaphors and paintings.  The result is a large-format book of four-color plates and text printed on glossy paper -- good reading and worthy of any coffee table you have in the house that needs something new and conversation-worthy lying on it.

The Shepherd's Calendar (2022, self-published), $15.00.

Click here to order a copy.

It's been a minute

Indeed! I took a long break from blogging and poetry talk (and the W@1 salon) after the pandemic to concentrate on writing and making music.  Let me introduce you to one of the products of that hiatus: The Weather in Bluffton, Ind.  

It's a 2024 book, launched in June, of prose poems and what you can think of as "lyric fictions."  In its 65 poems you'll encounter a loneliness that intrudes at the dinner table; a billboard that speaks (in Portuguese) to a busy executive; Popeye in Crete; a sex robot with good table manners; a hole in a man's pocket that leads to Eternity; a blue day, a brown town, a grey neighborhood; and of course, the weather in (mythical) Bluffton, Ind. where the month of February is subject to a permanent recall by the Campaign to Eliminate Winter.

These poems explore many themes of small town/medium city life: community, isolation, gossip, routine, outsiders, and for sure, life, death, the weight of the past.

Slender Book Press is a private publisher devoted to small and art books in short, high-quality print runs.

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The Weather in Bluffton, Ind., is available in hardcopy ($15 paperback only) or digital format ($7).  

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Louise Glück, 1943 - 2023

Louise Glück's death was reported in the New York Times today.  I am one for coincidences, I marvel at them.  Here's one: just last evening I finished reading her last book of poems, Winter Recipes from the Collective, a very thin volume of 15 poems in 43 pages.  It's a classically tough read (I don't know where her reviewers get the idea that her work is accessible - maybe they spend a lot of time reading truly opaque verse), and I was happy not to have to slog through more of it than was there.  

Anyway, good-bye to our generation's Nobel Laureate.

A Note on Form and the Transgression of It (3.29.23)

Here Is the Thing

mundi carmen

Here is the thing about the rhymed couplet:

You make a line of verse and then you double it,

And suddenly your world of Costco, cable and assault gun, 

The ball of shit you inhabit, Babel relation 

That rolls one ugly day into another

Relaxes, if only for a minute, into a zephyr

Of inconsequence: your broken world, if only

For a minute or two, isn’t broken and lonely.

Introduce as well syllabification,

Meter, stress, and end-of-the-line ligation

That favors rhyme and you can hardly claim

Disaffection from too much chaos or pain.

The case of couples, two by two, is why.

Equation, Orderliness, Law is why.

As for your constantly subconscious churn of mind—

Muddle, mess, morass, the daily grind—

Here is the thing that the double-hemmed hand-cuff

Of the couplet saves you from: you, yourself.

And today I wrote something again . . . (3.18.23)

Here's a tip for new writers, or any writer struggling with a poem: recast.

Let's say you are trying to write a poem, have developed a complete draft of it that has shape and movement, form and development, but it doesn't satisfy. The poem sounds forced, insincere, derivative (even of your own way of thinking and feeling!), unbelievable. And you don't believe it.

This is where I left off with the draft of a poem described in the previous post (3.17.23) in this blog. That draft was written as a villanelle and adhered pretty much to the form's requirements (in English) of 5-foot lines of largely iambic pentameter and an a-b-a rhyme scheme with repeating first and third lines.

I realized that I was committing the same error that I used to lecture my W@1 cohorts about, regarding rhyme: I was writing to complete the rhyme, not the sense; I was sacrificing the art to the figure. This affected content development in turn, effectively blocking me from any fresh thinking about where to take the next line: I worked to get to the line-end rhyme, no matter what the line actually said in relation to the lines before or after.

This predicament occurs often when I am trying to develop content through some device or other: a rhyme scheme, a stanzaic progression, a metrical footprint. I force myself into a framework that works against thought and feeling.

When you're caught in this kind of bind, all the drafting and redrafting in the world won't do a thing to break you and your poem free. It shouldn't come as a surprise to anybody that if you continue writing the same formula that produces a weak poem, you will only arrive at that weakness. The same track leads to the same destination again and again.

How to break free of this? Get off the old track. Take a new track. Get off track altogether and go off-road for a while. It always works!

So over the past 24 hours, I dispensed with the idea of writing a villanelle. I jammed all the lines of the draft together into a block of undifferentiated "prose" without end-stopped lines with rhymes and without the affectation of meter or syllable count. I dispensed with "form," for a draft or two, anyway.

The result? I now have a new draft that has "form," but a more organic form than before: two stanzas of equal length whose lines are roughly the same syllabically and rhythmically for the most part, though with occasional short lines and two somewhat longer lines. I italicize to emphasize that this draft avoids strictness in the sense of a traditional form. It assembles more organically, according to the rhythms, pitches, images, and ideas unfolding as the draft builds. It's possible, maybe even preferable, that a further draft will de-emphasize even the two equal stanzas or the roughly equal line lengths. Or this may not be necessary.

I found that by dropping the formal requirements, I was able to generate new information in the poem, and especially to develop a closing line that doesn't feel forced or "arrived at," even though it is. It's just that the content and voice now dictate where the poem begins (same as before), flows, turns and ends, not the strictures of the villanelle form.

So, for you writers who are stuck drafting a poem, are you doggedly trying to stick to some format (a rhyme scheme, a stanzaic structure, a line length, a metrical footprint, a repetitive pattern), hoping that that will deliver you to the art you want to create? Are you finding that the same ideas, thoughts and feelings that haven't been cohering for you keep coming up as you re-draft? STOP following the form! Drop the technical braces (or step off the technical path) and walk free. You may stumble or teeter or even fall flat. You may become lost for a spell. But you might also find the voice and the idea(s) and the art that your insight, eye or ear (or all these) has been looking for.

Instead of redrafting, revise - revision meaning exactly what it says: seeing things differently.

I wrote something yesterday (3.17.23)

Recently, I stepped away from Wednesdays@One, leaving it in good hands and with a full complement of writers who still attend weekly to work on projects and to share poems and readings.  It took me a long time, two years, to decide to move on, and now that I have, I am feeling either an obligation to read and write more poetry and poetry criticism/history/theory, or renewed energy for doing these things, because I've written almost every day over the past month, either here, in my journal, or in my word processor.  

Several new poems have been born as a result, a couple of which I think are good to very good, and several continue to form in my mind and on my laptop, where I tinker and toy, try and tease out new lines, phrases, breaths, images, figures. Two I am having particular trouble advancing, for two related but probably different reasons. I'll discuss only one of them here, and very superficially at that.

It's a villanelle and it's tormenting me.  I began it yesterday and, in a single sitting, drafted a complete version: five stanzas of a-b-a rhyme with a closing quatrain of a-b-a-a.  As I often do with this form, I struggled for an hour to compose the first and third lines, that is, the alternating refrains, these being the engine that powers the poem. The opening line I had created early in the day during a long walk, which I had finished more or less by the time I returned home. The third, a-rhyme, line was partly conceived by then as well and needed only a half hour's work to fit together. The middle line of the tercet, the b-rhyme line, took a little more time and, as it often does, created an obstacle because of its quirky rhyme requirement: fertile.

I say obstacle, but only because in choosing it I declined any easier close or masculine rhyme. At the same time, the word "fertile" opened up possibilities for near, slant, off and rhythmic rhymes, which turned out so far to be:

fertile

riddle

fiddle

apple

fickle

paddle

Which is all to say, the whole thing has turned into an exercise in formalities. Yes, the poem has a theme (God's contribution to Original Sin), and yes, the argument is developed logically beginning to end. But that's just the problem with the poem, it's very Audenesque, so to speak. It strives for cogency overlaid with irony and a bit of tongue-in-cheek. It wants to be read seriously but it doesn't want to appear Poetic and Sober. It's a poor hash of modernist trope upon modernist trope.

So now I may be back to the real effort of writing, to cast a cold, critical eye on what I write . . . and to push on with the drafting, hoping that eventually I'll find a way to drop the posturing and write a real poem.

I say this poem is tormenting me. That's an exaggeration. I am not tormented by poems; annoyed sometimes, dissatisfied, but not tormented. And in this case, the best word for it is probably unbelieving. I haven't yet brought the poem to a state where I can believe in what I am doing, that what I am doing is of much value as craft or art or feeling. I don't know that I'll be able to get it there.